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Submitted: November 28, 2007
File Size: 427 KB
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Resolution: 950×486
Comments: 2
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Make: Canon
Model: Canon PowerShot A510
Shutter Speed: 1 second
F Number: F/4.5
Focal Length: 6 mm
Date Picture Taken: Apr 19, 2004, 3:34:51 AM

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Charcoal, colored pencil on toned paper.
8"x16"
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=Flynn-the-cat:iconFlynn-the-cat: Dec 2, 2007, 1:35:11 AM
This is ... really good.
The only things I notice are - the lower goose, it's stubby and sketchy especially compared to the other, the right part of the lower lip looks too thin - I can't tell if this is just the perspective, but it looks wrong. And... the hair on the left. I think this is an effect of the shape/size - but it feels too little. Perhaps shading in the red slightly and fading it out more into the background among the trees?
Yeah - the red works well on the right, less so on the left, perhaps because it's so prominent and doesn't follow the black lines but is dashed over the top.

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